Friday, October 28, 2011

A Sentence Starts Out Like...

A sentence starts out like a marble perched at the top of a mountain. It sits waiting for some external force to push it into motion, setting it loose on a downhill free-for-all. Rolling out of control with only gravity as its guide. It is extremely raw and natural. It is a process moving towards a conclusion, and hoping that it does not crash.
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  1. Ethna LayOctober 31, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    A small, glass marble? Does it have a swirly center? What color/s? Show more.

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  2. steven.hartmanNovember 6, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    I agree with professor Lay, I think that this metaphor can be developed a lot more. I think it would be cool if the idea of the variety of places it could be taken to could be included. Overall it is good but can be improved.

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