I've been thinking about my own draft for Project 3, and I have to tell you (Prof. Lay) that it feels disjunct and not connecting. The piece as a whole seems a little bit like large chunks that do not exactly fit together. It's like a puzzle. All the pieces are there, they just are not fitting together perfectly yet.
I am peer reviewing a colleague's draft of Project 3, and my first reaction is that this draft is that is written about a good idea, yet not executed as well as it could be. The sentences are awkward when read in succession. Maybe if embellished and extended, they would flow together more naturally.
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