Wednesday, November 30, 2011

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The Problem of Describing Trees by Robert Hass
What is the argument of the poem?

In his poem, "The Problem of Describing Trees," Robert Hass argues that it is extremely difficult to describe trees because they are constantly moving, constantly changing, and never the same. All trees are different, and even one particular tree constantly shifts. Perhaps the reason trees are so difficult to describe is because they are better illustrated visually. Maybe, this is an instance in which the visual argument would be more effective than one that is linguistic. After struggling to fully explain and explore the tree, he even says, "There are limits to saying in language, what the tree did." It is possible, that Hass argues that trees would be best described in images, movement, and color - not in words.


"Dance with me, dancer. Oh, I will." Hass says to his reader. Just after launching the idea of a far more powerful visual representation, he asks his audience to go with the idea and to let it ruminate in their minds. He wants them to try to accept his seemingly unconventional argument. After all, he is a poet trying to argue that maybe words are less powerful than images.

Monday, November 7, 2011

Possibility of Visual Arguments

Can images do what words do? Are visual arguments possible?

Images can definitely do what words can. I am a dancer, if I did not believe that I could make a statement, create an argument, or prove a point using only the visual aspects of movement, I would be going into the wrong profession. It is my deepest belief that it is possible to communicate effectively without uttering actual words. I do admit that messages could be interpreted in different ways, and depending on the audience, the argument could be less strong if not explicitly spelled out in words. However, I stand by my belief that if strong enough, visual arguments can be equally as effective as written or spoken text.

Rambling List of Synonyms - Both Derogatory and Complimentary

Girl
Chick
Dame
Harlot
Lady
Lass
Ma’am
Miss
Madame
Chica
Chiquita
Wench
Maid
Gal
Woman
Female
Doll

Boy
Sir
Dude
Bro
Guy
Lad
Brother
Man
Bloke
Gents
Gentleman
Fellow
Male
Amigo
Chap

Considering Project 3 Again

I keep thinking about my project 3, and I'm pretty sure my next [rhetorical] move will be to reexamine my personal narrative. In its current state, the paper as a whole is very disconnected and in a way, chunky. Once I discover how to weave my personal stories through my explanations of home in a more cohesive way, my piece will be more effective.